literature

blue personality test

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Literature Text

paper weight, it seems
to hold down a feeling,
fluttering,
like falling petals
what is it called?
                                                (love)

tracing tree branches
miniature canyons on the bark
ridges,
cracked and rough
like the crinkles when you?
                                               (cry)

a skyline of orange
feeling lost, lost, lost
wandering,
slow, with no direction
like the phases of a?
                                               (red moon)
I've been working on imagery writing, as you might have noticed, because I do believe my writing is slurred or blurred or like a cold window you've breathed on.

Please bear with me.
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epic-fails's avatar
woah. that is well done... I don't know how to describe it...